Yeremia 8:16-17

8:16 The snorting of the enemy’s horses

is already being heard in the city of Dan.

The sound of the neighing of their stallions ¹ 

causes the whole land to tremble with fear.

They are coming to destroy the land and everything in it!

They are coming to destroy ²  the cities and everyone who lives in them!”

8:17 The Lord says, ³ 

“Yes indeed, ⁴  I am sending an enemy against you

that will be like poisonous snakes which cannot be charmed away. ⁵ 

And they will inflict fatal wounds on you.” ⁶ 

Yeremia 8:21

8:21 My heart is crushed because my dear people ⁷  are being crushed. ⁸ 

I go about crying and grieving. I am overwhelmed with dismay. ⁹ 

[8:16]  ¹ tn Heb “his stallions.”

[8:16]  ² tn The words “They are coming to destroy” are not in the text. They are inserted to break up a long sentence in conformity with contemporary English style.

[8:17]  ³ tn These words which are at the end of the Hebrew verse are brought forward to show at the outset the shift in speaker.

[8:17]  ⁴ tn Heb “Indeed [or For] behold!” The translation is intended to convey some of the connection that is suggested by the Hebrew particle כִּי (ki) at the beginning of the verse.

[8:17]  ⁵ tn Heb “I am sending against you snakes, poisonous ones which cannot be charmed.” In the light of the context literal snakes are scarcely meant. So the metaphor is turned into a simile to prevent possible confusion. For a similar metaphorical use of animals for enemies see 5:6.

[8:17]  ⁶ tn Heb “they will bite you.” There does not appear to be any way to avoid the possible confusion that literal snakes are meant here except to paraphrase. Possibly one could say “And they will attack you and ‘bite’ you,” but the enclosing of the word “bite” in quotations might lead to even further confusion.

[8:21]  ⁷ tn Heb “daughter of my people.” For the translation given here see 4:11 and the note on the phrase “dear people” there.

[8:21]  ⁸ tn Heb “Because of the crushing of the daughter of my people I am crushed.”

[8:21]  ⁹ tn Heb “I go about in black [i.e., mourning clothes]. Dismay has seized me.”